staff
feeling bad about my physical appearance
i feel insecure when you say "i love you so much"
i want to treat you better
not sure how to incorporate this into my
worldview
just deleted "view" ~7 times,
changing "iew" to "eiw" then back to
"iew"
organic jordan smoothie
i want to be my own person
not my idea of what i think someone’s idea of me is
can i eliminate worry regarding “controlling the perception of others”
can i decrease feelings of anxiety, depression, and self-consciousness by
not caring what people think of me
is that possible
slowly
not my idea of what i think someone’s idea of me is
can i eliminate worry regarding “controlling the perception of others”
can i decrease feelings of anxiety, depression, and self-consciousness by
not caring what people think of me
is that possible
i am going to peel the skin off of my body
and dismantle my bone structure, starting with
my face, so i can melt
and dismantle my bone structure, starting with
my face, so i can melt
slowly
becoming
an ‘organic jordan smoothie'
gmail chatting multiple bros
damn
sweet
listening to 'beirut'
interesting
damn / funny
seems sweet
seems sweet
okay
sup
might go to sleep soon
idk
just got home from work
damn
int
saturday morning, what should i do
there is something about 'my thought process and fat people falling' that causes me to type "fat people falling" into the search bar on YouTube
anticipating good feelings
in eighth grade i typed "gagging" into the search bar on XVideos.com
some of my favorite songs include "The Moon Will Rise" by Ghost Mice and
"Aside" by The Weakerthans
i listen to rap music loudly
when i am delivering pizzas
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NEWS:
- spoken war publishes 'series of unfortunate events'
the above poems are not from "no ceilings"
ReplyDeletewhen i unfocused my eyes and scrolled past the promo pic i thought you were in the background
ReplyDelete'in eighth grade i typed "gagging" into the search bar on XVideos.com'
ReplyDeleteha
seems sweet
ReplyDeletecongrats on wtf
ReplyDeleteGood job!
ReplyDeleteIt baffles me how you people are so self-righteous and delusional that you truly believe that this to be poetry. What I just read is completely devoid of all literary quality, and is at best, a sad attempt at irony, which frankly does not work. It is sad to see the future of literature in the hands of such numbskulls as Jordan Castro. 'have' 'a' 'good' 'fucking' 'day' 'bro'.
ReplyDeletei think you should give this guy a break; sure, his writing is terrible and, sure, his self-importance makes you want to kick him in the face, but, well, as far as i can tell, brotha has a pig nose! like, a real live pig nose! if you don't believe me just check out the first page of his blog and look for the picture of his nose. did you do it yet? did you go take a look? pig nose, right? damn straight i'm right!
ReplyDeletei'd guess that somewhere within themselves -- and by "themselves" i mean that greasy fellow from seattle, that girl/boy thing with the glasses, that heavyset gentleman from ohio, lin, etc. -- they know how untalented they are and that all of their lives will have peaked by the time they're 30. they have to realize this. i mean, god, they just gotta.
additionally, if lin's seemingly retarded followers had to tell the truth regarding what they think about their hero, i'd bet most of them -- if not all of them -- would say that they pretend to enjoy lin's work because it inspires them: if one hack can get a publishing deal then there's a chance other hacks might be that fortunate as well.
rest-assured, this is not the future of literature.
pig nose?
ReplyDeletewhat's so difficult to understand? look at the photograph on the main page that's directly under these comments.
ReplyDeletepig nose.
:-/
@mal, nice
ReplyDelete@david, 'hehe' / happy birthday
@tao, paul, glen, thank you
@anonymous #1, damn re "baffles" / "numbskull"
@anonymous #2, seems irrational that you did not 'capitalize' on tao's being asian, while 'bashing' everyone else without using their names / funny / damn re "pig nose"